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Love me by ~moclovneerg:iconmoclovneerg:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Open


If I were to say I love you,
What would you do?



If I were to say I need you,
What would you do?



If I were to say I can't live without you,
What would you do?



Would you say the same to me?
Would you love me as I do you?



Would you take me in your arms and kiss me?
Or would you run away and leave me behind?



Leave me alone and broken?
'Cause if you did, I'd die, I tell you.



Die a very painful death.
©2008 ~moclovneerg
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If you sing it in your head, it sounds much better.
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~oranges101614:iconoranges101614: May 16, 2008, 1:52:02 PM
Kinda embodies the idea of the trust that goes into loving someone, with all the questions you ask. Nice work. (:

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~Deathbyduckies:iconDeathbyduckies: May 17, 2008, 1:43:52 PM
~ I like it....but it seems familiar to me...but I dont know if
I've come across it before...is it an original?!>3<

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I. AM. AN. ALIEN. SPY.

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~moclovneerg:iconmoclovneerg: May 17, 2008, 1:48:08 PM
Yeah, it is.
I wrote it on a scrap of paper at school.
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~xLahalliax:iconxLahalliax: May 18, 2008, 10:25:46 AM
Where did you comme up with this? it's very... easy to relate to, yet very harsh.

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